The Darkening Shadows
As I came across a contest to send in a haiku themed around sixties cult gothic soap opera 'Dark Shadows', I set myself immediately up to the task and wrought a threesome of haikus.
Spawn of jealous blood;
whither inures your wrath,
oh, you stolid fiend!
Seasonal limbo -
buried secrets ferment here
your awakening.
While used to write poems - in English, which is not my native
language, which is Dutch - haikus demand a trifle more concentration and
effort from me, and I am not sure whether I get the count of syllables
correctly, as the way my Flemish ear hears and interprets them from
spoken, might be entirely different to whom is English is his or her
mothertongue.
The fey and rain-soaked
atmosphere outside the kitchen window at this moment (I live in
Scotland, my adopted new homestead) served my purpose and colours the
mood found in these haikus which I had offered for the prize draw. The
first one is serviceable but probably off the mark regarding the
requirements of a haiku (a pseudo-haiku so-to-say), but all three
together are now crafted anyway into a full-bodied poem of my own whimsical interest. It remains for now untitled and unedited and loosely connected like impressions of a particular mood.
Here we go:
the autumnal haar stirs slowly night's venom,
indolent shadows cohort prying fangs.
Barnabas snaps the smiling flower into tearful oblivion.
indolent shadows cohort prying fangs.
Barnabas snaps the smiling flower into tearful oblivion.
Spawn of jealous blood;
whither inures your wrath,
oh, you stolid fiend!
Seasonal limbo -
buried secrets ferment here
your awakening.
Comments
Though I couldn't craft Haiku to save my life, I enjoy reading those of others.
You have a gift with words. :-)
The first poem sadly exceeded the usual word count as normally seen in a haiku; maybe another day I might work around the problem, trimming it down somehow, excising its baroque padding. :)
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